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Summer days (I.P.)

Posted by Kahdai on June 21, 2010 - 19:24

Always prefer to be passenger or pillion,
I can day dream out the window or visor,
even motor ways, just for road trip sake,
sing along to on the radio or in my head,
stereophonics always in summer, dakota,
aberdare, hershis chox, long grass, smoke,
drink, laugh for any enough reason, just
to smile, and not worry atall, for a day.

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WillSimpson | June 21, 2010 - 21:27

love the imagery in this, reminds me of those scenes in many road trip films, where the acoustic style music comes on and the image of the face just staring out the window with a million thoughts running through their mind, or even as I'm writing this the scene in Dumb and Dumber when they both on the little moped, haha great.

MistakenMagic | June 21, 2010 - 21:33

A truly beautiful poem, Kahdai. And I agree - I love road trips just for the day dreaming opportunities. Love these lines:

'aberdare, hershis chox, long grass, smoke,
drink, laugh for any enough reason, just
to smile, and not worry atall, for a day.'

Magic xxx

maggyvaneijk | June 22, 2010 - 12:50

a beautiful collection of words that create a wonderful scene

Kahdai | June 24, 2010 - 13:41

Thanks very much everyone, it is just like in the films, you just stare out the window al wind pulling yur hair, or like a dog with floppy ears blowing back :D & think of every other summer day & road trip. xx (Will: am sure the moped it was cold?)