When the train jolts across
my head bumps against glass
again find myself dozed off
look for a sign in the grass
Nothing out the window knows
how far away I feel from home
anything to tell me if am lost
until I can name the next stop
You would all be waiting for me
yet I was on another train now
a thought train stole my mind
time to leave my home behind
while you wait beside a bed
hoping I will find my head.
Comments
celticman | September 9, 2010 - 20:19
a thought train stole my mind' Know the feeling very well.
Kahdai | September 9, 2010 - 20:55
:) good! Thanks for commenting celticman K x
Silver Spun Sand | September 10, 2010 - 08:05
I too like your word play with 'train'.
A clever poem that lots of people will be able to identify with.
Well done;-)
Tina
Kahdai | September 10, 2010 - 12:56
Thankyou for read & comment Tina! Glad you like it :) K