Triumph over defeat (I.P.)

As the walls came down,
only stone still stood,
the fires of rebellion,
took down all the wood.

The one most protected,
hidden up in this keep,
handing them over worse
than any pain of defeat

yet, now I am surrendering,
handing over this my sword,
at my knee down in the mud,
see gratitude I feel proud.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | July 3, 2010 - 18:16

Quite a stirring poem this one, Kahdai.

Well done!

Tina xx

Kahdai | July 4, 2010 - 13:31

thankyu Tina :)! xx

MistakenMagic | July 4, 2010 - 15:22

Love all the medieval imagery, Kahdai - especially the sentiments of the last stanza! Well done ;)

Magic xxx

Kahdai | July 5, 2010 - 18:37

Thanks magic, really glad you like it!(dunno medievil, meB 1200ish) K xxx