Unexpected Some-times

Under your perfect sand you in now lie,
looking forwards at your sunburned sky.
Do you still think of me atall nowadays?
As I remember you now still, Some-times.
They're sudden unexpected nostalgia,
randoms of everyday I think you would like,
things on tv we laughed together at,
a certain favourite song on the radio,
we used to sing a long together, when
we were on our own. Those were rare
& for me, at the time, precious moments.
Even now, I know I shouldn't, it's true,
When I get a Some-time I still miss you.

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Comments

MistakenMagic | March 27, 2010 - 15:57

'Under your perfect sand you in now lie,
looking forwards at your sunburned sky.'

- love the first two lines, Kahdai! I really love the melancholy, pensive feel to this one :)

Just caught a little typo - 'nowadeys' should be 'nowadays' ;)

Magic xxx

Kahdai | March 28, 2010 - 19:38

Thankyou Magic dear, glad you like it xxx