Forget the emotions
feel only the motion
ignore any memories,
concentrate now on
all around us that
reaches alert minds.
Here I am watching
feeling as the world
turns around me for
to be ready for my
time when it comes.
Now I am waiting as
my strength fills up
so I can be, be ready
for a second chance
if it ever day comes.
Comments
skinner_jennifer | July 27, 2010 - 16:20
One suggestion I came up with was "Ready and Waiting"
Jenny.
Kahdai | July 27, 2010 - 17:19
Thanks, I like that & thanks for reading it! k
Highhat | July 27, 2010 - 18:44
"Time to be " came up with me ?? but I think Jenny's suggestion is very good.
Pia
Kahdai | July 27, 2010 - 19:11
Ah yeah that maybe too! I might roll em together somhow... time to be ready?... thanks pia x
ioanad (not verified) | July 28, 2010 - 08:32
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Highhat | July 28, 2010 - 19:09
eh what?
rjnewlyn | July 29, 2010 - 21:15
"So I can be ready" would be my suggestion.
I liked this - the repetition. I think it would work well as a song, albeit a slightly off-beat one, or a poem set to music.
Rob
Kahdai | July 31, 2010 - 12:23
Yeah I think it is offbeat, thats a name worked out now. Thankyou for comment Rob! K