Train tracks have a tune,
metals notes run through,
on the rythem of a train,
like heavy drumming rain,
coming back for me again,
I am happy here I believe
yet still wish to be free
ch ch ch-th thumprun away
If I hear a motor up high
see what look like a bike
I know yet not believing,
not just me dreams to fly
imagining how free I feel
soaring up there sky lone
even though would be cold
silence in the air lonely
until wind rushs me home.
Theres a song in the wave
carried to me by the tide
& wind on this stormy day
make promises for tonight
if you throw yourself in,
by driftwood at your side
flow in a free moon ride.
sh sh sway let drift away
Stars twinkle with magic
singing to me old lullaby
that if I go up with them
safety in the endless sky
floating around in space,
know I wish to feel safe,
yet, for now I stay live.
Comments
skinner_jennifer | June 13, 2011 - 17:02
Hi Kahdai,
a beautiful piece. I know what you mean about the
train in the first stanza, you can get such a rhythm
going, I know I've actually tried it, except it sent
me to sleep.
Great IP.
Jenny.
Highhat | June 13, 2011 - 18:30
These are some good musical themes- the rhythm and beat of the train and the sea etc- very good Kahdai. Needs a few tweaks though - oops- sorry
atb
;)Pia
insertponceyfre... | June 14, 2011 - 05:43
yes, I really like the rhythm of this piece. You should run this through your spell check once more because there are quite a few typos
Kahdai | June 21, 2011 - 11:42
Thankyou Jenny hop you didnt miss your stop! Thanks Pia and insertponceyfre.. I changed agian and shay. As usual I focus on the song of it more than spelling K