Nights first starlings flock to hear, of a
time when lush twilight is near...
The Moon poses a question. Though I
attempt each eve'
only the sun is fit to answer.
When I wake I try to recall
if I went insane - or just dreamed it, but the
quill in my
mind has scratched too deep.. I
fall through each day until I face my
foe again. Though my thoughts
beat frantically at the Moon's great
drum -
There's no rhythm ...
I'm afraid I'll
shatter the great silver
face...
the greatest mirror I've ever seen

Comments
Doeslittle | March 13, 2008 - 00:27
I really, really like the idea of the moon posing a question only the sun is fit to answer. You used the word 'night' three times in the first four lines - do you need it that many times?
keleph | March 13, 2008 - 00:44
lol, no i dont. ive changed it. that was a very childish mistake, which i hadnt seen. thanks