My favourite book is of verse
With lines irreducibly terse
The poet, Miss Emily
is strong on the simile
and makes punctuation perverse.
My favourite book is of verse
With lines irreducibly terse
The poet, Miss Emily
is strong on the simile
and makes punctuation perverse.
Comments
kim.rooney | October 27, 2008 - 13:21
A rethink
making the short allusion- shorter
My favourite book is of verse
With lines irreducibly terse
The poet, Miss Emily
is strong on the simile
and makes punctuation perverse.
Yutka | October 27, 2008 - 18:42
i reread the "rethink" twice. Sorry, I must be blind. Cannot see any difference. Should I?
a rather sweet poem here, which I think quite funny.
kim.rooney | October 27, 2008 - 19:30
Aah... in the posted version - which couldn't be changed I had 'incredibly terse'. I then altered it to 'irreducibly terse', simply to make the words work harder.
Thank you for your feedback Yutka- it is (should anyone wonder)about the poet Emily Dickinson.
blackjack-davey | October 27, 2008 - 19:59
Simile does not rhyme with Emily