Sometimes


from the ABC set Poetry - The Recollected

Sometimes
a word
or criss-cross of words
will surprise me
'Write it down’ they say
'Write them now' they urge
But I don’t care
to eat green shoots
out of time
And time is like liquor

So I throw
those words
back to the mercurial depths
to get licked
and teased and kicked
into a bolder shape
along the mind's bed.

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Comments

Sooz006 | February 28, 2008 - 18:09

Nice concept to this one. Not sure I like the word mercurial, it elt a bit bulky and wordy, but I did like the idea and flow of it.