Have you ever had those moments?


from the ABC set Pot 1

Have you ever had those moments?

When all around is still
And if you listen very carefully
It's life force you can feel
Assimilate with atoms
Whirl around in space
Archaic knowledge that has been
Always leaves a trace

Have you ever had those moments?

When you simply know
That you are one piece of a puzzle
United we will grow
Is the picture getting clearer
No?
Well then ...
Open up your eyes

Ignore the facts that you've been taught
Disrobe from main stream lies
For ...
The world is full of wonder
We should stand in awe
Embrace this new found freedom
Stop demanding more

Have you ever had those moments?

When you simply want to be
When you really finally comprehend
What it feels like
To be free
The grass you'll see takes on a hue
As never seen before

. . .

Please

Take my hand

Please

Walk with me

There is much beauty to explore

. . .

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Comments

Highhat | October 24, 2010 - 13:33

Yes there is much beauty to explore and happiness to gain. Well done. Liked this poem
;)Pia

Highhat | October 24, 2010 - 13:36

Yes there is much beauty to explore and happiness to gain. Well done. Liked this poem
;)Pia
Sorry hit the button twice

Lady-Bathsheba | October 24, 2010 - 14:54

Thankyou kindly Pia -:)

insertponceyfre... | October 24, 2010 - 14:55

I love this ladyB. the bold works very well here too.

skinner_jennifer | October 24, 2010 - 14:55

Hi Lady-Bathsheba,
This is a great poem, exactly how I feel. You have
taken the words right out of my mouth. I think it's
only with age, that we discover that what we want,
is right in front of our noses. We can look at
Mother Nature in all her finery, to realise the
beauty all around us.
Thankyou for a very enjoyable poem.
Jenny. xx

skinner_jennifer | October 24, 2010 - 14:57

Wow I just put this comment on and hey presto, you
have cherries, congratulations, well deserved.
Jenny.

Lady-Bathsheba | October 24, 2010 - 14:58

Thanks so much Jenny - I am humbled to get a cherry for this and very flattered :)

Lady-Bathsheba | October 24, 2010 - 14:59

Thanks ABC for the cherry - You guys are great !!!

RachelPatricia | October 24, 2010 - 16:33

Brilliant this - think we can all appreciate the sentiment here. Well done on the cherry :)

Rachel xx

Lady-Bathsheba | October 24, 2010 - 17:08

Thankyou kindly Rachel -:)

fatboy74 | October 24, 2010 - 23:30

Well deserved cherry Lady B, v.good poem. :-)

Lady-Bathsheba | October 25, 2010 - 08:35

Thanks so much fatboy -:)

JoseHdz | October 25, 2010 - 21:24

lovely poem. enjoyed your use of bold font.. thought provoking poem..

cheers