Loving You (free verse)


from the ABC set Liebe Gedichte <3

I love you.
You say you love me.
But I think you could never be
As much in love with me
As I am with you.
That would be
Impossible
To do.

I love you.
You said you would see
Me through hard times, and
Never care that my rhymes can't
Express what we share.
I miss you
When you are not
There.

Love is true.
Forever and ever
Something you can't do without
Like air. Something untouchable
But there-
You can't see
Love, but it makes itself
Felt.

In lovers' hearts as they begin to melt.

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Comments

HeatherFeather | February 10, 2009 - 13:02

Wow its so sad! :(
Ily xxxx HeatherFeather

Kahdai | February 10, 2009 - 13:15

Aaw! That's so sweet! I think about the first bit...

Nathan Bednarek | February 11, 2009 - 13:41

A very sweet poem and some beautiful lines here. The last line is a spit'n'polish finish. Well done.

Nathan.