White Roses

Oh do not weep for me my love
Now I have met my fate
I only wish that you had known
Before it grew too late.

They were his words, the words you spoke,
His joys that lit your face-
One glance, and you became my soul,
My salvation your grace.

Oh do not mourn for me, my sweet
I’ve seen you as of late
In dim-lit rooms, curled on yourself
And weeping, without cease-

Don’t be like me, and let your dreams
To mist evaporate.
All that I ask of you’s to please
Hang roses on my gate.

The curtains cloud vague window eyes
Dull embers crowd the grate.
Leave everything to dust and dreams-
White roses on the gate.

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Comments

BT Gorman | November 24, 2011 - 22:48

nice, but did u nick that from Christy Brown? not that I object to influential tendancies, most of mine is Sheamus Heaney clashing wiv Oscar Wilde!!lol.

Lem | November 25, 2011 - 10:56

Who's Christy Brown?

MistakenMagic | November 25, 2011 - 17:52

"I’ve seen you as of late
In dim-lit rooms, curled on yourself
And weeping, without cease"

- beautiful, haunting images, Lem. Great to see you posting on ABC again! I found time to post my latest piece in between essays - but the work is mounting up. At least I've got my literary criticism essay out of the way. Am I right in thinking it's French you're studying? I'm doing a module in Old French this year - Marie de France, Chretien de Troyes & co! Ah, I have rambled. But this is a delicate, ethereal piece - perfect for this wintry weather!

Magic xxx

Kahdai | December 16, 2011 - 19:48

Nice one Lem :)