Whetstone ground, rasped, in smooth small circles;
You taught us how to hone a sliver of hate to a glint.
Slip point 'twixt gristle and bone as hens' bane;
Soft pressure bares pearlescent sheathed flesh.
We, Tulps' kitchen pupils, table pressed, crane
A view, then You, twist, pull, grey sinews stretched
As silly-string; a nick, amputate at the spur, free.
Now claw and squabble for the prize; ochre scaled
Capons foot, marionette plaything; spoils
For patient attention at the anatomy class.
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Comments
Dynamaso | March 29, 2009 - 10:48
I've come back to this as there is something about some of the imagery. It evokes both beauty and ugliness at the same time. An intriguing piece...
lenchenelf | March 29, 2009 - 10:57
Thanks D :-) As children, we didn't have the same distance or preconceptions of our food as the supermarket generation :-) atb L.
nb: the herb, Hen Bane, is extremely toxic...avoid!
Silver Spun Sand | March 29, 2009 - 15:57
As Dynamaso rightly says, this is an extremely interesting poem, that does evoke mixed emotions. I much admire your choice of vocabulary. You have some lovely 'sounds' in there. A well written piece that I shall come back to from time to time.
Tina
Dynamaso | March 29, 2009 - 23:04
Yes, I can remember helping my mum pluck and dress chickens a number of times. Putting one that close to the source builds a healthy respect for it as well, I believe.
I've heard of Hen Bane but wasn't aware it was toxic. Thanks for the heads up. :)
lenchenelf | March 29, 2009 - 23:24
Thanks Tina, very much appreciated, just experimenting with a few ideas.atb L
Hi again D, apparently, a fairly well known UK chef made a bit of boo-boo by recommending its use, swift amendments all round, he meant 'fat hen', it could have been disastrous :-o atb L
threeleafshamrock | March 30, 2009 - 10:40
Used to gut chickens in a chip shop, in my early teens; never looked at a little red hen in the same way since;) I too was unaware of the toxicity of Hen Bane. Nice, unusual piece.
Chris ;)
lenchenelf | March 30, 2009 - 12:29
Thanks Chris :-) atb L