You bounce 'cross the lawn
without slightest care
for pounds per square inch
or underwear.
Spacehopper Pilots,
wingmen of my dreams,
you ride laughter currents,
side slide-slip sunstreams.
Paddling pool splosh,
crazed trampoline spring,
in bubble blown hiatus,
good weather brings.
Jam butty party,
Custard pie fight,
all in the bath now,
time for Good Night.
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jennifer | June 10, 2009 - 11:05
Superb couplet here:
'You ride laughter currents,
Side slide-slip sunstreams;'
wouldn't like to try saying it when drunk, however!
Lovely alliteration!
J x
lenchenelf | June 12, 2009 - 16:42
Thanks J, it is a bit of a mouthful :-) my youngest son loves tongue-twisters and rickety rackety noisy rhymes, I should employ greater discretion when peppering my doodles with them :-) :-) Thanks again atb Lena