White city centre cabs swoop,
like gawping black-eyed Gulls;
kerb swerve a northern Brine Fly
swarm, pick off a few, calorie rich.
How they ripple, eddy; wavelets
reveal hail-crust engilded paving
slab's readysteady mirrorshine
of vacant lighthouse beacons.
Loft-living reflected, sharp
as napped flint for the down
to earth, scuffling, short sleeved,
bare legged; back to back-to-back,
skint. The bus station stage yawns
its hepatic yellow-eyed welcome.
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minor edit 29.09.10

Comments
jennifer | March 18, 2009 - 13:00
Chaotic, echoing a city in full swing, cleverly written!
J x
lenchenelf | March 18, 2009 - 15:31
Thanks J; Chaos, hmmnn, sometimes I think I see a hint of the fierce order of nature in the super and infra-structures :-) Just experimenting with visual conceits & implied structures, hey ho, atb L