From the top deck


from the ABC set Camera Obscura

White city centre cabs swoop,
like gawping black-eyed Gulls;

kerb swerve a northern Brine Fly
swarm, pick off a few, calorie rich.

How they ripple, eddy; wavelets
reveal hail-crust engilded paving

slab's readysteady mirrorshine
of vacant lighthouse beacons.

Loft-living reflected, sharp
as napped flint for the down

to earth, scuffling, short sleeved,
bare legged; back to back-to-back,

skint. The bus station stage yawns
its hepatic yellow-eyed welcome.

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minor edit 29.09.10

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Comments

jennifer | March 18, 2009 - 13:00

Chaotic, echoing a city in full swing, cleverly written!

J x

lenchenelf | March 18, 2009 - 15:31

Thanks J; Chaos, hmmnn, sometimes I think I see a hint of the fierce order of nature in the super and infra-structures :-) Just experimenting with visual conceits & implied structures, hey ho, atb L