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Posted by lenchenelf on May 28, 2010 - 14:02
from the ABC set Infinity plus one

Did I mention how I would love
sunset, kissed on your lips.

We survive slow melt of each
day's frost; charge glass

for loss, as old age must.
Final rest, for blood, lust

forgotten in slow pulse, dust
of heels, kicked, long ago.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | May 28, 2010 - 17:17

I think I've mentioned this to you before, but I don't half wish I could doodle half as good as you.

Tina;-)xx

lenchenelf | May 28, 2010 - 21:14

Thank you Tina truly delighted you like it atb Lena xx

insertponceyfre... | May 28, 2010 - 21:41

I really enjoyed this doodle too Lena

lenchenelf | May 28, 2010 - 21:47

Thank you very much atb lena xxx

MistakenMagic | June 1, 2010 - 17:26

Just beautiful, Lena! Well done on the cherry :)

Magic xxx

lenchenelf | June 4, 2010 - 23:52

Thank you Magic, much appreciated atb Lena xx

Curse of 222 | June 5, 2010 - 14:33

i really enjoyed this. a well deserved cherry, indeed.

jason

lenchenelf | June 5, 2010 - 17:39

Thanks Jason, appreciated, not sure at all about the 'deserved' bit, I thought the cherries were a mark that an editor liked a particular piece, but beyond that, were not a scale of merit ? Thanks again and all the best lena xx