I'm coming back ma dear,
coming back to see you,
This day I have thought about since I left you.
Don't worry ma dear I havnt forgot you,
Far from it, I've missed you everyday!
I'm coming back ma dear,
Not for long but I will be back,
Just like old times how fantastic they were,
Still are and will be when that number 30 arrives :).
I'm coming back ma dear,
So I hope them straight jackets are ready,
Because it's not long now ma dear,
So I'll see you soon Beeme! x
Comments
Lennie | October 19, 2009 - 20:44
Hope you like it Beeme :) x
rae1 | October 19, 2009 - 22:42
Oh..really like this piece. The punchy feel to the words is excellent! Very quirky and engaging!
Rach x
Lennie | October 20, 2009 - 06:40
Thankyou Rach for your kind comment!, I'm glad you like it :)
Lennie
Beeme | October 21, 2009 - 07:01
I really like this Lennie! I can't wait till next week, I'm so excited! Thanks for writing this, made my day ;-)
Beeme xxx
Cavalcaderl | October 21, 2009 - 08:26
Beeme
So pleased loved "lennie's
poetic poem to you have a
great time both of you
make the most of it so pleased
for you.I bet you can't concentrate
or sit still!
julie xx cavalcader x
Lennie | October 21, 2009 - 13:09
Hey Beeme,
Glad you liked the poem it was good fun writing it, same here really cant wait until next week :).
Speak to you soon.
Lennie x
Lennie | October 21, 2009 - 13:13
Hi Julie,
Thankyou for you kind comments, havnt wrote a poem in a while, was good fun to write again. Great hearing from you thankyou again.
Lennie x
Cavalcaderl | October 21, 2009 - 17:36
New Lennie
Well done
I to love the punchy lines come from the heart.
so exciting you and our "Beeme" of sunshine.x
good luck to you both missed you on here while.
julie x cavalcader made my day to (;-