We have walked through memory mansions
And turned antiques in the light of the sun
Examining their principles of creativity,
Finding the life force in objects,
Reading tapestry stories carpeting stone walls.
We have climbed the staircases of turrets,
Carved slit windows through rock
And surveyed the historic landscape of home,
The stone walls running veins through woodland and pasture
Those stacked bricks of mountains and fallen towers.
We have strolled gardens of abandoned beauty,
The magnificent design of labyrinth and fountain,
And Rose planted gardens for the blind
To know the shape and movement of fauna there,
To walk alone through the ploughed fields home.
We have descended to The Library's damp walls,
Oak table, solid chair, candlelight, quill, ink and parchment,
Sliding wooden ladders to the highest shelves,
We have sat with him or her in the silence of just before dawn
Running our fingertips down the index pages and spines of heavy books.
We have felt the cold rheumatoid hands, the pains of others,
And the absolute shades of grey in visions; lantern light,
Oil of Atlas cedar wood warming cherry fires, the comfort
Of hand sprung armchairs at the hearth, lifting the sash
On Victorian windows, burning manuscripts in summer fires.
We have floated by the mottled silver of mirrors
To kitchen's pantry and all still life,
Melting the wax off apples with the hunger of an eye,
Slicing fertile loaves and cold meats for a wooden tray.
We have made baskets, for rivers, and gratitude.
We have poured milk from terracotta jugs,
And at sunset goblets of wine from simple urns,
Wooden cups, blackjacks, flagons and measures,
The Fleur de Ville metal suits of armour's thirsty arms outstretched,
The flower cup of love pouring black skies milky white with stars.
We have waded through flooded cellars, drowned in passages of wine,
Seen Gunpowder plots and walked the tinder box planks of theatres,
Stepping out alone onto an empty stage, we have played
Where The Pit bears witness, fruit is thrown, the light shines,
And people pray their own way on the dusty long way home.
Through stone walls, burning slats and cobbled streets
We have wondered like children at the moving stories in wallpaper,
Roasted chestnuts and sweet potatoes, roots on metal drums,
Flown a year of nature, the changing man with the changing woman,
Kerosene, fire jugglers, the sweat of labour, the sweat of love.
We have walked through dewy grass on a Spring morning
And listened to the cicada on starry nights,
We have danced in rays of the moon, pulled truth from weaves of light,
Found joy in the colours of the sun, the rain, the footsteps we take
To walk our very own Rainbow. Hail! Spring!

Comments
DavidK | March 20, 2008 - 18:47
Very TS Eliot!
Doeslittle | March 20, 2008 - 23:02
Also some very beautiful lines - my favourite might be 'We have danced in rays of the moon, pulled truth from weaves of light'.
Ssor | March 21, 2008 - 15:21
Eliot? More like Rimbaud who floated through the phantasmagoria of the mind. Rarely done in English. The concrete elements and observations secure the dream world. Very French with an English twist. The French like English furnishings, so it would appeal to French readers of poetry I'm sure. The use of 'we' although often problematic helps, in this case, to work through the letting go of the self and the expansion into the elements of the universe, both localized and distant in possibility. It's a kind of invitation to imaginative journeying with the pronoun 'we' allowing for the reader to join in rather than as a record of the exclusive experiences of unknown lovers or friends.
One awkward moment:
And Rose planted scented gardens for the blind
or And Rose planted gardens for the blind. Scented is in the way there somehow w.r.t. sound.
Ssor | March 21, 2008 - 15:25
You know that incredible moment when Rimbaud declared: "I is the other". Still haunts from Nepal to Boulder, Colorado.
littleditty | March 22, 2008 - 10:17
Where's Boulder? Thanks all -i might write one like this when im not channelling the greats, half gone in a sunny armchair - :p - the 'we are'...thing sounded boring after a while and i stopped and fell into a deep deeeeeep sleeeeeeep - i suppose the mish mash lack of structure through the seasons is a bit dreamy, 'haunts'? 'I is the other' he declared :Oo *faints* agree about scented i think
cheers
Ewan | March 22, 2008 - 10:57
Mork and Mindy was set in Boulder. :-)
littleditty | March 22, 2008 - 17:58
Ah! Thanks -
Ssor | March 24, 2008 - 23:11
Boulder is a Buddhist centre in North America:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Naropa_University
Allen Ginsberg was centred here for quite a while I believe. He was a beat poet in the 50s till the 80s.
littleditty | March 26, 2008 - 10:59
Ah! Thanks - Yes - i remember this from somewhere:
Jack Kerouac School of Disembodied Poetics! Looks like an interesting Uni - cheers!