And yes if I smoked
I would have had a fag
not just the vodka cocktail
a pinky Sea Breeze
as I sat on the sofa
and pondered
awaiting your return.
Eighteen you may be
but you're my son
my own flesh and blood
you are part of me...
So yes if I smoked
certainly I would have
had a fag, a cigarette
a nice soothing smoke
So next time call me
text me and just let me know
you are safe
and on your way home.
Comments
seashore | January 7, 2011 - 10:07
I like this one.
Louise178 | January 7, 2011 - 10:16
Thank you :)
celticman | January 7, 2011 - 10:48
expressive and impressive.
Louise178 | January 7, 2011 - 12:49
Thanks :)
fatboy74 | January 7, 2011 - 17:53
Belated Happy New Year Louise - love the matter of factness of this. Well done. :-)
Louise178 | January 7, 2011 - 18:14
Happy New Year Fatboy hope you are well and thanks for your comment :)