The kite it soared
high past clouds
in the summer sky
the wind it blew strong
I tried I tried
to hold on tight
the string it slipped
and razor cut
my desperate skin
vainly I ran I reached
floundering, but
the wind it blew strong
I raced I ran
but the wind
it blew strong
out of sight now
I searched, hunted
across the world
what could be done
tiredness set in
for an aimless journey
a returning path
to a starting point
of a summer day
that drew in red
scar lined tissue
on tender skin
I raced I ran
but the wind
it blew strong...

Comments
celticman | November 4, 2010 - 22:22
nice movements and moments
Louise178 | November 5, 2010 - 07:35
Thank you for your comment, hope you understood it wasn't about a kite though :)
Kahdai | November 6, 2010 - 15:02
Ooh I have been wondering what the meaning behind it could be? Losing someone? K