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Posted by Louise178 on May 18, 2011 - 13:56
from the ABC set Poems

1. My big eyes send you love
4. Down on the floor cruising
3. Can't you understand me?
2. It's a long way up
5. Hey don't push it's my turn
6. Letters, numbers yeah I can do this
7. I wanna be in your gang :)
8. Study...na outside on me bike thank you
9. Exams came they went
10. Night clubs parties....work
11. Yes I suppose I will
12. Then along came you

Now it's your turn, skip up to number one
and let's start again...

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | May 18, 2011 - 17:47

Good stuff, Louise, and I wish you 'bonne chance' with the competition;-)

Tina

Louise178 | May 18, 2011 - 18:25

Thank you Tina :)

The Big Bad G | May 19, 2011 - 17:10

Quirky, I like it. I was thinking about an acrostic, but you may have it here. Can I ask why it's not in order though, am I missing something?

Louise178 | May 19, 2011 - 17:42

Yes you are missing something.....it's obvious when you know :)

Cavalcaderl | May 25, 2011 - 21:03

new Louise178
Yes, liked this too.
Good luck with the comp
Short and sweet.
julie

Louise178 | May 26, 2011 - 06:24

Thanks Julie, Good Luck to everyone else aswell, it's quite fun entering a competition isn't it :)

Highhat | June 8, 2011 - 10:56

I like this- it is quite unique- but a bit of a riddle for me- that's only my fault !!haha
;)Pia

luigi_pagano | June 8, 2011 - 11:33

A good interpretation of the given title. If I'm not mistaken it describes the progression of a young girl growing up.

Louise178 | August 5, 2011 - 15:14

I am sort of wondering if the cherry picking robot has clicked on the wrong thing? Seems a bit strange but anyway who cares it's most welcome :)