Next summer


from the ABC set Poems

You sing of a beautiful dawn
as I lay flat out
on the bed
resting, I stretch
and relax in thoughts
of weekend
adventures

You sing of a beautiful dawn
as I sit on the edge
of the bed
I put down my cup
it is empty
feelings anticipate
times ahead

You sing of a beautiful dawn
I get up and make a move
leave the room
with the words
drifting through
the door
left ajar...

I want to be there too
next summer
on your duvet
in the grass
to sing quietly
of our own
beautiful dawn.

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | October 14, 2010 - 15:35

Hi Louise,
what an entrancing poem, looking forward to being
with a loved one once more, simply beautiful.
Jenny.

Louise178 | October 14, 2010 - 15:38

Thank you for your kind comments Jenny :)

Highhat | October 14, 2010 - 18:39

very tender and beautiful
;)Pia

Louise178 | October 14, 2010 - 20:29

Just like me! :)

Kahdai | October 14, 2010 - 20:32

Ah its great, makes me wanto stretch & sing! :D K