Tongue in cheek - like this

By Louise178

Thu, 16 Aug 2012
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It's just it's like this
I like clear pretty guitar strings
uncomplicated a tuneful piano melody

standing here in the rain the fog a train roars past you surrounded by a pile of suitcases well it's all starting to suffocate me when my life it's clear as glass simple blue skies sunshine that's me you see it's just like this
dramas and forgotten lives should they be resurrected time after time with all these old lives is there ever gone be enough room for a new one

with my one suitcase well it's just it's
like this one suitcase is ok isn't it but
well several you just can't carry them all

you see it's like this perhaps you may miss a blue sky or a pretty piece on the piano Elton John it's so sad and so it's just it's like this.....

Certificate U
Poem
Paper Basket Poetry
Humour

Comments

Submitted by Louise178 on
I couldn't really set it how I wanted so forgive me.

Louise

Submitted by Parson Thru on
When you get what you see in your head onto the page, let me know how you did it. It's like this... this is really quirky and different and that's great. I like it a lot, once I've taken the time to stop and give it some time, because that's when the words all fall out into my lap. I love it Louise. Better for reading over again. They're the interesting ones.

Parson Thru

Submitted by Louise178 on
What lovely comments Parson, thank you. Usually my ideas come from thoughts that are mulling over in the back of my head and then suddenly I will get a few words that pop to the front. I do actually have a poem I am trying to take time over and craft but I am just not very good at that but I am going to try as I have a few good lines that I like in it.....fingers crossed. Had a look at yours and do rather like your style !!!

Louise