Uncomfortable

I used to say- let India stay with the Indian people, because of the extreme poverty! I liked this!Thank you.

'you bought an idea
of someone else's sun
their beach, their sea
their time, their sweat
your eyes turn blind
as they work, they smile, they run'

- really loved these lines. Great poem, well done ;)

Magic xxx

Thank you Highhat, it took several days and several attempts and lots of mulling around in my head. So thank you.

Thank you Magic x

it paid off Louise - all the mulling. I like it too - well done!

Thank you for your encouraging comment insert.

Magic has already picked my favourite stanza, so suffice to say I like the rest of it too.

Thanks shoe.