Argumentative and arrogant he may be
But bellicose most definitely he is not .
Chalk and cheese we are, Carlo and me.
Determined to improve, I read a lot.
Erudition looms large in my background.
For him physical activity is paramount;
Girls most of all: he likes to play around.
His conquests are so many, he lost count.
I think that he is insensitive and uncaring
Judging by his conduct, casual and reckless.
Knowing his attitude can be overbearing,
Lessons in common sense would be useless.
My own behaviour may also be deficient,
No man can claim to be without reproach.
Others who say that they’re self-sufficient
Perhaps are following a positive approach.
Quite how I can attain such confidence
Remains a challenging task in front of me;
Self-doubt is what ails me, not indifference.
To emulate my old friend could be the key.
Unwilling to take risks, I was held back,
Vitality has gone to hell and damnation;
What I did not possess was Carlo’s knack.
X-rated movies, he says, are my salvation.
Yet I can’t reconcile my principles to his:
Zealot that I am, I think it is a swizz.
© Luigi Pagano 2011

Comments
Geertje Jong | January 22, 2011 - 12:15
Absolutely stunning Luigi!!
Both erudite and lovely
Crisp and butter smooth
Don't ever try to emulate
Ever searching
Fickle friends
Geertje;)
luigi_pagano | January 22, 2011 - 12:34
Hi, my dear Dutch friend,
I thank you with all my heart.
Just to let you know my appreciation,
Kisses on both your cheeks I place.
You can carry on from where I left off. Cheers.
Luigi xx
seashore | January 22, 2011 - 13:07
Brilliant!!
luigi_pagano | January 22, 2011 - 13:16
I am so glad that you like this, seashore. Many thanks for letting me know.
Best, Luigi.
Geertje Jong | January 22, 2011 - 13:17
I'll take that as a compliment Luigi.
Geertje
Cavalcaderl | January 22, 2011 - 14:44
new Luigi_Pagano
Brilliantly done A-Z
for the (IP)
julie xx
luigi_pagano | January 22, 2011 - 14:54
:-* Geertje.
luigi_pagano | January 22, 2011 - 14:57
Dear Julie, it took me all morning to put this poem together but I think it was worth the effort.
Many thanks for reading and commenting.
Luigi xx
fatboy74 | January 22, 2011 - 21:38
This has taken some doing and it is well worth the effort, molto bene Luigi. :-)
insertponceyfre... | January 22, 2011 - 22:17
I am full of admiration! Even a Z - wow!
luigi_pagano | January 22, 2011 - 23:02
Grazie 'ragazzograsso74'. I must admit it wasn't easy but I got there in the end.
luigi_pagano | January 22, 2011 - 23:07
Hi insert., many thanks. The Z wasn't a problem; there was very little scope for the X though.
That Carlo, what a guy. He seems to attract cherries.
:-)