Mission Accomplished


from the ABC set Cherry ripe

It’s early morning and we are in bed.
You ask if I recall the first time. I do.
It was with Sally Anne in the shed;
I bet you think that it was with you.

That girl was hot and full of passion,
forever giving pleasure, never grief.
“I want to go commando on a mission”,
she told me, “Stand by for a debrief.”

She explained the extent of her strategy:
to explore an unfamiliar dark terrain.
Her demeanour was that of a prodigy
who made her intentions very plain.

So I de-briefed her just like she said
and started to advance to a location
that should have been Maidenhead
but wasn’t; without equivocation.

I found the experience quite sublime
and decided to repeat the experiment.
And this happened; time after time.
Those hours were indeed well-spent.

© Luigi Pagano 2009

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Comments

threeleafshamrock | August 20, 2009 - 19:23

It was a tough mission but someone had to do it! I admire your willingness lol.
Very good, liked;

She explained the extent of her strategy:
to explore an unfamiliar dark terrain.

Amazing how familiar that old battleground becomes ...thoroughly enjoyed Luigi ;)

luigi_pagano | August 20, 2009 - 19:42

It was a tough mission alright, Chris, but she said that she didn't mind how hard it was.
I was merely obeying orders but was quite pleased with the outcome.
Cheers.

threeleafshamrock | August 20, 2009 - 19:52

LOL! Oh, you Commando - you! ;)

sarah wilson | August 22, 2009 - 08:52

I really enjoyed this Luigi - realy well written and funny to boot!
sarah x

luigi_pagano | August 22, 2009 - 09:07

Kind of you to say so, Sarah, many thanks.
Luigi x

chuck | August 25, 2009 - 21:14

The way things are these days I would probably have slept through to Reading.

luigi_pagano | August 26, 2009 - 08:25

Hi chuck. That bad, uh? Thanks for stopping by.