It’s early morning and we are in bed.
You ask if I recall the first time. I do.
It was with Sally Anne in the shed;
I bet you think that it was with you.
That girl was hot and full of passion,
forever giving pleasure, never grief.
“I want to go commando on a mission”,
she told me, “Stand by for a debrief.”
She explained the extent of her strategy:
to explore an unfamiliar dark terrain.
Her demeanour was that of a prodigy
who made her intentions very plain.
So I de-briefed her just like she said
and started to advance to a location
that should have been Maidenhead
but wasn’t; without equivocation.
I found the experience quite sublime
and decided to repeat the experiment.
And this happened; time after time.
Those hours were indeed well-spent.
© Luigi Pagano 2009

Comments
threeleafshamrock | August 20, 2009 - 19:23
It was a tough mission but someone had to do it! I admire your willingness lol.
Very good, liked;
She explained the extent of her strategy:
to explore an unfamiliar dark terrain.
Amazing how familiar that old battleground becomes ...thoroughly enjoyed Luigi ;)
luigi_pagano | August 20, 2009 - 19:42
It was a tough mission alright, Chris, but she said that she didn't mind how hard it was.
I was merely obeying orders but was quite pleased with the outcome.
Cheers.
threeleafshamrock | August 20, 2009 - 19:52
LOL! Oh, you Commando - you! ;)
sarah wilson | August 22, 2009 - 08:52
I really enjoyed this Luigi - realy well written and funny to boot!
sarah x
luigi_pagano | August 22, 2009 - 09:07
Kind of you to say so, Sarah, many thanks.
Luigi x
chuck | August 25, 2009 - 21:14
The way things are these days I would probably have slept through to Reading.
luigi_pagano | August 26, 2009 - 08:25
Hi chuck. That bad, uh? Thanks for stopping by.