On a train


from the ABC set Mixed bag

I wish I could describe to you
in your cramped house with the sheltered garden
the spaciousness I see,
the expanse I feel
when riding in a train
across the plain.

The windows have magic glass
that deepens the green,
intensifies the verdure
(why, even the bank at the side of MKC
- opposite the glass block -
is daisy-spotted and green)
that you whizz past on a train:
the crowded June leaves bursting out of the trees on the line,
and the fields and pastures and ragged hedges
on the plain.

And if I had a laptop with me
or several Ordnance Survey maps
I could maybe identify the stations I wasn't quick enough to read
and the canals that now and again lie alongside
and the occasional wooded hill
across the plain.

But of course there are landmarks,
the rise that looms by Macclesfield,
the slag-heap north-west of Nuneaton,
the dark walls where the line divides to Northampton.

And there is another branch line that goes - where?
backed by much hedging and many trees,
so we seem to be hemmed in a hidden valley.
On the way back a line of containers waits there
red, blue, orange against the viridian
and then I see an aged sign, TO CREWE AND THE NORTH
and an old-fashioned arrow,
and perhaps that handsome grey building I glimpsed
really does belong to Shugborough Hall.

And I wish I could describe the wide, changing sky,
how the light falls and livens the scenen, or fades and makes it sombre,
the broad rays that sometimes streak from a cumulus cloud,
the pathos of the golden evening and the sunset
as the sandstone spires and the grey towers greet me distantly
and the successions of pylons converge
near my childhood home
far across the plain.

Sometimes I wonder, shall I ever visit
those towns and villages beyond the glass -
Stoke-on-Trent, Rugeley, Polesworth,
Heaton Chapel, Norton Bridge, Holmes Chapel -
and those other, unnamed settlements
on the plain?

And maybe one of the other passengers, London-bound,
Will wish they could alight (like me)
at Milton Keynes,
where the bank is dotted with daisies.

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Comments

russiandoll | June 10, 2011 - 18:37

Lol and here am I, on a train... with a laptop and a great deal of thoughts about wishing I was in a quick enough frame of mind to capture it all in words and turn it into a poem. Thanks for a great read and the serendipitous encounter with your work :)

Highhat | June 11, 2011 - 14:43

This was a very pleasant train ride for me. Thank you

;)Pia

Cavalcaderl | August 14, 2011 - 18:27

new Luly Whisper
Really enjoyed the train journey,
with you. It if ull of memories and stations.
And part childhood. I did one once on a train,
to a wedding, on here very high readings "Song Of Songs" spiritual. No lap-top, just being observant
of all, on paper so amazed and pleased. Jounrey1'
get bit boring, iof one doesn't, do anything. Some of poem describing passengers, I enjoyed tring it.
Good see your writing.
julie xx

Cavalcaderl | August 14, 2011 - 18:35

new Russiandoll
We don't use the train much although,
we get free pass, as x B/Rail South Connex.
But we went to wedding about an hour. away,
don't have a laptop, so managed try, write
on paper sbout descriptions and clothes, passenger's,
all about scenery, and wedding on way back. "Song Of Song's". from spalms read wedding on here, highest reading in all have tried. Just let the mind flow. Study and scribble and change to many times, not original. It was an amazing thing to do.
julie x