His eyes like magic
His name, a song
His hair, a wonder
Like snowfall in mid-summer
The small tingling
As he strokes my cheek
Gazing deep into my pupils,
i can't help this feeling
It feels right
To be with him
The love i feel
from deep within
The moonlight shows
A state of beauty
As the wind makes a breeze,
Making you shake
Do you know
Of the beautiful pictures
I see you in
Each night?
But with all this
I still don't know
do i love you
Or is my mind lying?
Comments
Curse of 222 | December 6, 2009 - 03:30
"Do you know
Of the beautiful pictures
I see you in
Each night?" --now that is a poetry line! this piece is a definite step up from 'E or J'.
good job
jason
lyssagurl_l0l | December 6, 2009 - 04:56
thank you very much, jason. yes, i liked this one a lot more too. thank you for the comment!
~:)alyssa(:~