I wish to be a black rose,
A strange, exotic beauty,
An outcast from all those.
I wish I was a notebook,
someone else controlling my emotions.
Maybe I wouldn`t be so shook.
I wish I was full of grace;
A godly, balanced, healthy girl,
Along with the pretty face.
I wish I could be a sweet kiss,
To fall upon your lips each night,
And make sure your swelling with bliss
I wish to be a tall, strong tree.
I`d give oxygen to lungs,
And let children climb on me.
I wish I was a small bird,
To fly with freedom and joy,
To be not only seen, but heard.
Comments
skinner_jennifer | December 2, 2011 - 09:42
Hi there lyssagurl_101,
I actually read this as a poem, even though you put
it as a story. I really thought the sentiments
behind this piece, were beautiful...especially:-
I wish to be a tall, strong tree.
I'd give oxygen to lungs,
And let children climb on me.
I wish I was a small bird,
To fly with freedom and joy,
To be not only seen, but heard.
I love trees and birds, the two seem to go hand in
hand and I think that more people should think like
you. A stunning piece of writing.
Jenny.
skinner_jennifer | December 2, 2011 - 09:43
Hi there lyssagurl_101,
I actually read this as a poem, even though you put
it as a story. I really thought the sentiments
behind this piece, were beautiful...especially:-
I wish to be a tall, strong tree.
I'd give oxygen to lungs,
And let children climb on me.
I wish I was a small bird,
To fly with freedom and joy,
To be not only seen, but heard.
I love trees and birds, the two seem to go hand in
hand and I think that more people should think like
you. A stunning piece of writing.
Jenny.
skinner_jennifer | December 2, 2011 - 09:43
Hi there lyssagurl_101,
I actually read this as a poem, even though you put
it as a story. I really thought the sentiments
behind this piece, were beautiful...especially:-
I wish to be a tall, strong tree.
I'd give oxygen to lungs,
And let children climb on me.
I wish I was a small bird,
To fly with freedom and joy,
To be not only seen, but heard.
I love trees and birds, the two seem to go hand in
hand and I think that more people should think like
you. A stunning piece of writing.
Jenny.
skinner_jennifer | December 2, 2011 - 09:43
Hi there lyssagurl_101,
I actually read this as a poem, even though you put
it as a story. I really thought the sentiments
behind this piece, were beautiful...especially:-
I wish to be a tall, strong tree.
I'd give oxygen to lungs,
And let children climb on me.
I wish I was a small bird,
To fly with freedom and joy,
To be not only seen, but heard.
I love trees and birds, the two seem to go hand in
hand and I think that more people should think like
you. A stunning piece of writing.
Jenny.
lyssagurl_l0l | December 2, 2011 - 23:21
Thanks Jenny :) Your comment is much appreciated. By the way, I meant to put it as a poem. I`ll fix that
~:)alyssa(:~
Highhat | December 3, 2011 - 07:07
Very good- Your= you're- 4th stanza last line