Imperfect Perfection


from the ABC set Love

You are so beautiful
In your eyes I see your soul
Gorgeous; perfection
Every move is wonderful,
An art in motion,
A beautiful Mosaic;
Better than any van Gogh
More exciting than any novel.
I would rather gaze into your eyes,
listen to your voice,
Feel your kiss, your touch
Without your wonder I'd have no love
No interest for anything
No care for anyone.
My love for you is incomparable.
Our love can overcome anything
You have me awestruck
By Your outstanding perfection
created by imperfection
I love it all

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Comments

maisie | May 9, 2011 - 03:54

tis lovely ta! very long sentence structure tho. is it possible to reduce?