Love kept her for a teacup

Love kept her for a teacup close to his lips
With both hands trembling on her hips
Her eyes they too were so love-in
That he pulled away at her silk napkin
She held him like he were a teaspoon
But he felt just like a great big baboon
His kisses were like rose water honey
Their bodies crumpled like a Dali oil limply…

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Comments

Anne Shirley | October 21, 2011 - 07:38

Pretty!

skinner_jennifer | October 21, 2011 - 07:45

Hi Mark,

I really liked this poem.

Jenny.

Blessing | October 21, 2011 - 13:17

Absolutely thrilling ... Can taste it. Thank you

Mark Heathcote | October 21, 2011 - 22:33

Thank you for positive comments. Blessing you made me smile :)