how should I decide
make a decision
a choice
after weighing up all
the options
the pros
and cons
with the heart
or with the head
spontaneous
or planned
should I look
for a sign
a portent
an omen
speak to friends
seek advice
they could tell me
to do the wrong
thing
worry about
consequences
the fall out
what if I get it
wrong
regret
rue
is there any point
making one
in the first place
Comments
Birl | August 17, 2008 - 11:51
Hey
I'm not sure this is poetry. A lot of poetry does get accused of being cut up prose arranged in lines and this feels like that.
Do you write other stuff that has rhythm and meter etc?
Cheers
Birl
martin_t | September 17, 2008 - 14:54
tend to write like this tbh, has become the norm for me, i know what you mean, but poetry has a pretty wide definition imo