Another dawn and Kookaburras laughed with the promise of rain . The tropical breeze swept through and whispered an ancient memory on the salt bush plains . The river ran again through our property . It had been dry to long . Three years of drought had taken Dad away from us and since his passing Mum and I tried top keep things going on the farm . Feed had arrived too late for the sheep and most of the cattle had been sold at half of what they were worth . Mum needed the money to pay off Dad's outstanding debts .
It was still early and we hadn't got over Dad's death but it wasn't for the want of trying .
After we had sold all the stock the only source of income we had came from the mangos on the property . It was hard after dad died but Mangos kept Mum and I alive under that old rusty tin roof over our heads . It was a harsh existence here in this place . Some thing's can be a step away from hell at times .
The flies and dust , the sun and salt bushes . But there's also a little piece of heaven here too with the wild birds and the river when it flows . If you can stick it out through the dry seasons you can appreciate the desert blooms and the mangos . For six years now Mum and I had been in the mango business .
I still remember the day she gave me a pair of new work boots and said ,
"Well son its just me and you now ".
I looked over at her as she stood at the stove cooking breakfast . I loved her pancakes .
"Hows the weather out there . Are the mangos ready for picking yet son ?"
She never looked over as she turned over the pancakes .
"'I heard the kookaburras early on having a laugh , so I think there's rain on the way . I should have all the mangos in boxes by tomorrow ."
I went over and stood beside her .
She took the pancakes from the pan and placed them on a plate and handed it to me saying :
"Hows the fence down by the desert gum by the river ?"
With a muttered response due to half a pancake in my mouth I replied ,
"I fixed it yesterday ."
Quick as a flash she asked ,
"Did you see that Brumbie around yet ?
I shook my head and answered ,
"No . I think its gone somewhere else ."
As I began to make my way over to the kitchen table she called after me ,
"Well son tell me then , Cindy doesn't mind living out here on the property with us ?"
I stopped and looked back and said ,
"No Mum , I told you she can't wait to leave the big city ."
She took off her apron and said ,
"Ok then . I'll fix up her room today . Now have your breakfast . There's a lot to be done today ."
She headed out from the kitchen and into the shed .
As I eat breakfast I though about how times had changed for me thanks to Mum .
The day she wrote that letter to some TV Show in the city called The Bushie wants a bride . I still remember the day all those city girls came out here to meet me and how I fell in love with Cindy .
Now we were to be married and wouldn't you know it she wants to live here with Mum and I .
Families like us are lucky I guess .
Only three weeks to go and my name will be hers .
Mum likes Cindy and the same goes for Cindy too .
We're going to have a bush dance after the wedding .
Most people around here have met Cindy . They think she's great .
Now I had two best friends and thanks God life is good and so are the mangos .
The End
By Paul McCann

Comments
Jasper_Milvain | May 9, 2009 - 20:21
Line 5: Change top to to. Line 8: change Dads to Dad's - the same in Paragraph 2 Line 1. Paragraph 3 Line 4; change Something's to Some things.
She took the pancakes from the pan and placed then on a plate and handed it to me saying.
you can get around this confusion by using a colon:
She took the pancakes from the pan and placed then on a plate and handed it to me saying:
is better.
Thanks Paul. This had a nice feelgoodness about it.
Thanks.
JM.
mcscraic | May 11, 2009 - 11:36
Thanks JM for your constructive critque .
Its appreciated .
Paul