Semetric Poetry Form
This is a style I created myself and has a focus on repeating the words used in each line .
The poem is broken up into two parts with the each section being a mirrored replica of itself and continues to the finish of the poem .
My Examples
From Here To There
By Paul McCann
A lifetime spend on bended knee ,
On bended knee a lifetime spent .
I beg of thee turn and repent ,
Turn and repent I beg of thee .
We leave behind this mortal life .
This mortal life we leave behind
In shades of time all will be mine .
All will be mine in shades of time .
Glory Be Praised
By Paul McCann
I am alive because of him .
Because of him I am alive .
Man cannot live on bread alone .
On bread alone man cannot survive .
I’m nourished by the living word .
The living word I’m nourished by .
They shall not die who ever hears .,
Who ever hears they shall not die .
We shall be raised on the last day .
On the last day we shall we raised .
Your name be praised forever Lord.
Forever Lord your name be praised .
Before the night there is the dawn .
There is a dawn before the night .
With all my might I love thee Lord
I love thee Lord with all my might .
Comments
FTSE100 | February 20, 2009 - 00:16
Fear is the path to the dark side.
The path to the dark side, fear is.
Gone is the boy you trained,
The boy you trained, gone he is.
I have earned it,
Earned it I have.
- Yoda -
Do you mean 'symmetric', by the way?
mcscraic | March 26, 2009 - 04:25
Hi There Yoda
thanks for the input .
Each time I create a new poetry structure , I give then a name . It was Semetric that I called it .
I like your attempt a my structure Yoda .
Nice work .