The Loving Caress of An Affluent Hand

I asked her every Wednesday for a year
for something more than
coke smudged lips,
a cafietere of awkward coffee,
silver spooning at a gold card hotel,
health spa handjobs,
Jimmy Choo spew.

She smiled (that terrible smile),
rubbed fifties against my balls
as I dribbled cognac on her twelve grand stomach.

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Comments

Dynamaso | August 27, 2008 - 00:40

Sharp, tight and funny as hell.

Doeslittle | August 27, 2008 - 11:40

I thought this was great too. All excellent lines.

MikeyH | August 28, 2008 - 16:15

Ta people. It is only really half a poem-got distracted but thought I would post it anyway. Maybe I'll finish it off sometime...