Henryk

Magic - you are building a magnificent collection of this poetry. Another truly moving piece written which such maturity and empathy which belies your years.

With your words you create an inherent tenderness which demonstrates admirably the closeness of grandson and grandfather.

Well done, again.

Ooooooppss! Just popped back to say I hope you enjoy your cherry which only just appeared as if out of thin air. Somehow I don't think one will ever have tasted as sweet;-)

Tina x

The sweetest I've had so far :) Thank you for all youe help Tina - and listening to all my moaning!

Magic x

This poem affected me so much. Not too long ago my Grandpa died. I had a really close relationship with him and this poem reminds me of the times I've spent with him and for that I thank you Magic. You have a way with people's hearts ;-)

Nathan.

Thank you for your feed back Nathan! I'm so sorry to hear about your granpa :( I lost my granpa a few years ago, so I understand the pain. But at least we can treasure the moments spent with them and remember ;)

Magic xx

An enormously effective piece that strkes at the very marrow of the reader. Very accomplished writing. Val x

Thank you so much for your feed back Bradene :) I really appreciate it!

Magic -another very good write, again you have the distance working for you, through the intimacy of their relationship you get to the heart of the matter, and so to the readers - the tattoo is a very interesting image in such poems for obvious and not so obvious reasons - may be you knew tattoos are not a Jewish thing at all - by religious law they are not, so the tatooing was particularly abhorent during those times, for them, and afterwards too - (try my story, Tattoo :) xx