Only A Little Lonely

It starts there in the quiet; in the quiet and the cold
Descending like a shadow, seeping slow into my soul.
Resigned and mute, I feel it come, a thief into my home,
Snatching gold-leaf from bright moments 'til I face the dark alone.

Listless, trailing cold fingers along a blank wall,
Singing soft sad little songs about nothing much at all.
But there's very little I can do to make the feeling go away,
Because I'm only a little lonely anyway.

It's not a gaping chasm, not a sadness like a wound
It's not a perfect mystery, solutions to be found.
It's quiet and invisible and that's why no-one sees
A lonely hollow deep inside,
A lonely, empty me.

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Comments

insertponceyfre... | September 11, 2010 - 21:22

I particularly like the first stanza of this poem - some wonderful imagery. Well done

Steve Button | September 11, 2010 - 21:30

I really like "I'm only a little lonely anyway" - nicely undercuts the gloom :-)

MistressDistress | September 11, 2010 - 21:48

Thank you both- I have to say the cherry lifted my gloomy mood somewhat. Now I am only mildly melancholy.

kuno-chan | September 12, 2010 - 04:42

i love the poem. it puts my feeling into words that i would have never thought of.
thank you

----Kuno-Chan----

Kahdai | September 17, 2010 - 21:50

Its meanto be sad? yet cheered me up! K x

beaste | April 26, 2011 - 18:45

its a good poem but I cant help wondering what made you feel so lonely.

Kahdai | April 29, 2011 - 15:34

& next to write... mildly melancholy! I hope ;)
onli hope only a little more cheerful though ;)