Intense

No intense arduous gain
Atop two alligned hills
The empty kindness impales
Lost gratitude not ignorance

Hills touch empty minds
Or silence opal dreams

Overt trances to envisage
Great emblems with eyes

Parting over hidden darkness
Newly arranged under orange
Yet heightening the intense wonder;
The sea applauds

Festered ledges emblazoned blandly
Near incredible, electrifying mountains
Incongruous tonight, yet lesser evenings
Vote on long afternoons

Dreamy admired hills

Intense

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Comments

Nathan Bednarek | January 27, 2010 - 15:38

Much enjoyed. A big well done form me.

Nathan.