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Posted by mykle on March 22, 2008 - 19:54
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For Heaven's sake before you die.
Be a cloud and kiss the sky.
Fly the oceans, sail the seas.
Feel the sunshine, taste the breeze.
Smell the flowers, feed the birds.
Speak your mind but choose your words
Trek a mountain, swim a lake.
Notice every breath you take.
Live and love - be unafraid
Don't worry 'bout mistakes you've made.
Find the beauty in all you see.
Then you may die happy...
Just like me.

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Comments

LawOfTheOne | March 23, 2008 - 00:39

Great response to the inspiration point.
Excellent rhythm and beat through the whole thing.
Really liked it,simple, clever and well executed.

mykle | March 23, 2008 - 09:08

That is most kind LOTO.
I expect many will find it a bit corny...
but corn feeds the world :O)

Many thanks and have a Happy Easter!