Number 111


from the ABC set ABCTales Inspiration Points

a small row of matchbox
apartments
line the curve of a highway
spilling out of a field
of yellowing grass
and fences

number 111
in sadness, southern Texas

a small one bedroom
with a
two by two
balcony
its floor covered in soil

the plants
have started to grow
and the green breathes different
in this corner

watched over by a man
his hair loose down to his waist
special force tattoos down his arms
a smoke dangling from his lips

and in the corner
the red topped gnome

to remind him of his mother's garden.

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Comments

tcook | November 9, 2009 - 15:15

Superb!

Silver Spun Sand | November 9, 2009 - 16:29

I agree, hands down, with Tony. A little gem:-)

Tina

rjnewlyn | November 9, 2009 - 23:21

Anything mentioning southern Texas is fine with me. I was there once and it stays in my dreams. Wonderful.

RJ Newlyn
http://www.myspace.com/robnewlyn

nancy_am | November 10, 2009 - 11:49

Thank you Tony and Silver :)

RJ - I couldn't agree with you more. I visited Texas with so many preconceived notions and was delighted to find how wrong I was about it all.

annie01 | May 26, 2011 - 08:53

Beautiful Nancy, hope you are well. take care. xx