Their camouflaged uniforms
knitted into the soil, blending.
A slab of stone; an ode engraved.
Singing necropolis dorms;
a lullaby for troubled sleeping.
An old marching road repaved.
A silver piece of junk; a metal
honours a patriot’s death.
Honours are made of bullets.
Brothers in arms like Cain and Abel.
Gunpowder stained their last breath –
an update for their audits.
Let us honour their long lives.
We should bless the soil; their deathbed.
Tuck them into body bags
and into the coffin; grim captives.
Yes, let’s remember the dead;
let us bury the used up dish rags...
Nathan Bednarek 2009.

Comments
MistakenMagic | April 3, 2009 - 18:15
I'm really glad you reposted this Nathan. It has always been one of my favourites - especially as I am such a history nerd ;) Love the lines;
'A silver piece of junk; a metal
honours a patriot’s death.
Honours are made of bullets.'
Overall brilliant imagery!
Magic xxx
Nathan Bednarek | April 3, 2009 - 18:22
Thanks Magic. I know you're a 'history nerd' ;-p, so this one's for you.
xox
Silver Spun Sand | April 5, 2009 - 13:58
The last line of this, sent a shiver down my spine, Nathan.
As magic says, your imagery is excellent. A poem that has great impact.
Tina x
Nathan Bednarek | April 5, 2009 - 14:08
Thank you so much dear Tina, I appreciate it ;-x