“High Honours”


from the ABC set Coffee Spoons.

Their camouflaged uniforms
knitted into the soil, blending.
A slab of stone; an ode engraved.
Singing necropolis dorms;
a lullaby for troubled sleeping.
An old marching road repaved.

A silver piece of junk; a metal
honours a patriot’s death.
Honours are made of bullets.
Brothers in arms like Cain and Abel.
Gunpowder stained their last breath –
an update for their audits.

Let us honour their long lives.
We should bless the soil; their deathbed.
Tuck them into body bags
and into the coffin; grim captives.
Yes, let’s remember the dead;
let us bury the used up dish rags...

Nathan Bednarek 2009.

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Comments

MistakenMagic | April 3, 2009 - 18:15

I'm really glad you reposted this Nathan. It has always been one of my favourites - especially as I am such a history nerd ;) Love the lines;

'A silver piece of junk; a metal
honours a patriot’s death.
Honours are made of bullets.'

Overall brilliant imagery!

Magic xxx

Nathan Bednarek | April 3, 2009 - 18:22

Thanks Magic. I know you're a 'history nerd' ;-p, so this one's for you.

xox

Silver Spun Sand | April 5, 2009 - 13:58

The last line of this, sent a shiver down my spine, Nathan.

As magic says, your imagery is excellent. A poem that has great impact.

Tina x

Nathan Bednarek | April 5, 2009 - 14:08

Thank you so much dear Tina, I appreciate it ;-x