“Just another night”


from the ABC set Transparent mirrors.

Just another night out
like so many before.
Just another part
of London; another store;

another local fish’n’chips;
another restaurant or a bar;
another three hours of small sips
of white wine and an hour to home by car,

but we get there in a quarter.
Just another night of breathless
laughs and sighs in candle amber
burning the sheets of the sleepless.

Just another evening
that I silently wish it
was as easy as that; instead I’m sipping
a pint of lager and enjoying a lemon tart...

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Comments

jennifer | July 8, 2008 - 13:47

Rather sad and yet humourous!

Loved:

'Just another night of breathless
laughs and sighs in candle amber
burning the sheets of the sleepless.'

Bradene | October 3, 2008 - 12:12

Love the Last Stanza. Poem starts out serious ends up funny yet somehow wistful, very well executed. Well done Nathan. Val

Nathan Bednarek | October 7, 2008 - 23:00

Thanks a lot for your comments. They're very encouraging.

Nathan.