“A Letter to Eros”

Some fantastic lines here, but this is my favourite stanza:-

"In half-asleep horizon light
they drink wine together –
watch a movie,
then forget the plot."

Well done, again, Nathan;-)

Tina xox

'With each whisper
of downfall draught
their lust breaks through
the wall to my room,
dancing irritably
like a mosquito
that found a hole
in the net.'

- love this stanza, Nathan - and love the entire poem! As you know this one will always be just a little bit more special for me ;)

Magic xxx

I'm glad you like it, Tina, and thank you for all your help on this one! ;-)

Cheers xox

I'm glad you like this stanza- it took me ages to get it right and I don't even know why ;-p

I'm glad you like the poem and yes, I know it spoke to you on a more personal level, which is a great compliment to me as that is one of the main reasons why I write poetry- to reach people and their hearts in any way that I can ;-)

Again, thank you for your wonderful comment.

Love, Nathan xox

Nathan this is so stunning, I love all of it, and it is so carefully constructed, I felt privelged to be reading a poem so beautifully cared for,

My favoruite parts
"Pleasured by his lips
her dandelion moans
strike me like hay fever
and yet

I sit in my storm-cloud silence –
listen as spring blossoms."

Beeme xox Massive well done!

Thank you so much for that lovely comment Beeme. You really made my day ;-)

xox

What a beauty this is x

THANKS!!!

I really enjoyed this poem Nathan. Thanks:)

And thank YOU for reading it ;-)

This is so beautiful, a treat to read. I love your carefully chosen imagery.

Thank you! I think imagery is very important in poetry, so I'm glad you appreciated it in this particular piece ;-)

Nathan.