“Sepia pictures and red wine”


from the ABC set Transparent mirrors.

Too familiar are the notes
of Moonlight Sonata to me,
like the hasty hum of the roads
searching for a place to flee.

It plays to me always –
or whenever I look through
the stack of sepia pictures.
A wine glass, half-full,

stays within my reach
and sometimes never leaves
as I attempt to bleach
out the red-wine stains

that have dried many times
and are now in sepia – red
in a stack of memories
filling an empty bed.

Too familiar are the sounds
of half-full wine glasses to me
in a rhythmic jingle of rounds
searching for a place to flee...

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Comments

MistakenMagic | August 15, 2008 - 19:02

'Too familiar are the notes
of Moonlight Sonata to me,
like the hasty hum of the roads
searching for a place to flee.'

Such a beautiful start! And I love the circular structure, repeating the line 'Searching for a place to flee.'

Nathan Bednarek | August 15, 2008 - 20:32

Thank you so much! Lovely comment from you as always ;-) can't wait for more work from you!

MistakenMagic | August 15, 2008 - 20:39

Well, I've got another 15 poems awaiting departure :) Just a little nervous to post them at the moment. Promise you a new one first thing on Monday!

Nathan Bednarek | August 16, 2008 - 11:12

Great!