“Unconditional Love”

Nathan, this poem enchanted me, truly.

From the first two lines:-

"Handmade love, sailing in a bottle
a ship destined for display."

to the last two:-

"Your eyes paint a portrait of despair,
with hints of hazel-brown hope..."

I cannot pick a favourite stanza. They are all special. Your poetry has such a unique style, Nathan, something which is hard to achieve, but you seem to do it with ease.

Although I always admire and enjoy your poetry, this one for me is quite special.

Very much enjoyed.

Tina

Wow, thank you Tina. I'm glad you like this one so much, but I must say that I'm quite surprised. I didn't think it would have this much appeal, but if YOU say that it's good then I guess I have no reason to be worried ;-p

Again, thank you so much for your lovely comment.

Nathan.

The first two stanzas were my favourite! Such intriguing imagery :) Well done.

Magic xxx

Thanks Magic, I appreciate it xox

No problem and Happy Valentines Day - you wouldn't happen to have my address would you Nathan? Strange question I know, but I actually got a card in the post today and have no idea who it's from! I have to narrow down anyone I've ever come into contact with lol My sister thinks it's my ex boyfriend! pfff

xxx

Well it definitely wasn't me, because as Jehovah's Witnesses we don't participate in celebrations like that, but thanks for your lovely comment ;-x

Enjoy your half-term.

Nathan.

I agree, the first two stanzas are the most powerful and serve as a hook in a poem that flows gracefully. You've done it again my friend!

Thanks Nathan, I shall enjoy my halfterm - though it's stuffed with home work assignments :( But I'm looking forward to next weekend, I'm going down to Oxford to look around the university ;)

Magic xxx

Yay! Another cherry! Well done Nathan ;)

Magic xxx

Thanks xox

Imagery painted on a canvas as surely and lovingly as any 'Constable'. There is almost a scent or flavour to this piece that makes you want to linger over it; and when you have passed it by to come back and visit again. The cherry is just the topping for the cream that it sits on.

Chris

Wow, cheers mate. Now this is what I call a delicious comment! ;-p

I'm glad you like this poem so much and I really value your opinion, so again thanks ;-)

Nathan.

This is a wonderful poem. Richard LP

This is a wonderful poem. Richard LP

Thank you Richard! Much appreciated.