Home Alone

The great ghosts of recent history
Hang around the house
Icing up the icebox
Peeling the paint

Glasses get cracked
Tea cups stain
Shampoo goes missing

The lamps perform a pantomime
Of flicker
The rugs recede

Pictures that were perfectly
Aligned
Tilt to the right
Cushions that were plump
Pucker

I linger on the middle landing
Look up the dark stair
Look down the dark stair
The banister bending

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Comments

Ewan | July 30, 2008 - 08:19

Spooky. Lots of nice stuff in here; liked the alliteration

'rugs recede' 'plump pucker' etc...

'The lamps perform a pantomime of flicker' was especially good.

Most enjoyable poem.

regards
Ewan

Doeslittle | July 30, 2008 - 08:23

I think it's a very good poem too and can't say anymore than Ewan really, but I have read it a couple of times as I liked it very much.

Dynamaso | August 1, 2008 - 01:25

I agree with the above comments. I like this a lot.

Nicola6 | August 1, 2008 - 13:01

Thanks!

luigi_pagano | August 4, 2008 - 11:33

Excellent poem. Enjoyed it a lot.