Orgasmic Fluid


from the ABC set Love on Ink *HAIKU*

Thrusting deeply.
Passionate piercing shreeking.
Thick warm juices leaking.
Orgasmic fluid dripping.
Down your thighs..so creamy.

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Comments

jennifer | June 16, 2009 - 17:23

Isn't Haiku supposed to be 5,7,5 syllables?

J x

Jupiter | June 16, 2009 - 17:49

Hi Pin. What's this about mate? ;-) lol

pinda | June 16, 2009 - 19:33

Yes Jen I think it is,but I just make my own style Haiku lol(Small poems) ssssh don't tell anyone lol

pinda | June 16, 2009 - 19:34

*Points to nose* lol

Jupiter | June 16, 2009 - 20:33

Seems a lot to say about a nose ;-)
You asked me to let you know if I did something you might be interested in, well you may or may not like my poem but there is an exhibition in the UK of an ex-graffitti artist called Banksy who is now world renowned and I thought his work might interest you. Check out the poem (Banksy), it has links below to a video and image web pages. I think you will find it interesting. Love to hear what you think.

pinda | June 16, 2009 - 22:50

Just check it out.I left you a message.

threeleafshamrock | June 17, 2009 - 11:53

Well it ain't about 'bingo' that's for sure ;)

Chris ;)

Jupiter | June 17, 2009 - 11:55

You know how it is sometimes hard to read between the lines on here Chris ;-) Ha! Ha! LOL

sarah wilson | June 17, 2009 - 13:51

Go for it Pinda:) sarah x