They speak behind my focus, they taunt and laugh
Race and colour is decieved in this world
They are like nursery bullies
Except you are called a paki instead of a girl
You wish to fight back, but you are part of a minority
Against the law it may not be
If racism continues we may never be free
"They build paki shops and mosques those dirty shits"
I hear that alot a typical stereotype to put us down
To suggest we are good for nothing, but wogs
Worst thing of all is Im not a Muslim Im of an Indian descent
"But never mind he's still a paki"
"Lets be devious and cunning and feed our evil content "
Jokes may be funny but slurs are not
Our lifes made miserable by these devious cunts
Makes me think if society will ever be democratic
Mahatma Ghandi- Eye for a eye makes us all blind
Marting Luther King- I dream when Blacks will mix with Whites
Our peaceful leaders assasinated because we wanted the same rights
Nevermind my Brothers and Sisters, worse happens in society
We are nothing more than dirt
Remember we are just a minority

Comments
pinda | February 19, 2009 - 19:56
Please comment on how to imrpove my work
thank you
tcook | February 20, 2009 - 15:35
Your atrocious spelling does put one off - but the spirit and the honesty of your work shines through. Do try and amend the spelling though and work on the overall sound. Read it out loud and try and write so that there is a rhythm to it - not a standard, bouncy one - but one that reflects the subject matter. This should be fierce and angry, pistol sharp and rat a tat tat. Keep going - you have talent but need to refine it!