Romantic Sex

Hi, I'm Tune, the man on the moon
I live on the beach, sand in my shoes
All of that changed, when I met you
So lets get it on in the nearest restroom
I need to pleasure you, lick you out soon
We can get freaky from the dawn till the noon
Eat off each other, no need for a spoon
I'm fallin' for you baby, I need a parachute
Orgasmic feelin' got you wet, you need a wetsuit
Your lips taste exotic like a fresh fruit
Penetratin' deep inside your sexy love roots
Your fine ass and body got my eyes in a shock
My dick wants to be inside you, hard as a rock
We do a lil' foreplay and it's time to get kinky
Those pink bra and panties, make me call you pinky
My tongue is in your body, soakin' in the milk
Your insides are soft and smooth like synthetic silk
I tell you "spread your voluptuous thighs"
Don't worry, they're only for my wanting eyes
"Allow your drenched division to be on display"
You smile and giggle as my tongue infiltrates
I'm penetratin' your interior essence and it's sweet
Soon you'll be ridin' my dick along to your heart's beat
You're about to let passion take over and orgasm
You release that delicious milky sweetness into my mouth
I love you baby girl, now that's what love is about

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | March 30, 2011 - 16:24

Wow! Pinda this is very, very erotic, I nearly fell
off my chair with excitement. No only kidding.

An arousing read.

Jenny.

pinda | March 30, 2011 - 16:49

Lol, don't worry I don't write these kind of lyrics very often :) Just about to read your latest chapter.

Thanks for commenting

X
Pinda

oldpesky | March 30, 2011 - 17:22

Jings! No wonder the man on the moon has such a smile on his face.

pinda | March 30, 2011 - 17:57

Hahaha, spot on Oldpesky!

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Pinda

RachelPatricia | March 30, 2011 - 21:33

'Hi, I'm Tune, the man on the moon
I live on the beach, sand in my shoes'

- I certainly didn't see this one coming, even with the title! Nearly fell off my chair, too! :D

jennifer | March 30, 2011 - 21:47

The '18' rating and the two lines you've chosen to put as a 'teaser' sort of contradict, don't they? Please be aware of this!

Great rhythm and 'voice' here; would benefit from a little more structure (stanzas, line breaks, punctuation, etc) - it's a bit dense at the moment.

J x

pinda | March 30, 2011 - 22:38

Thanks for the comments, Penandpaperdreams & Jennifer.

Sorry about the wrong choice of 'teaser' didn't really think about it to be honest, I'll definitely be more careful in the future. I'll improve the structure for future posts :)

X
Pinda

Highhat | March 31, 2011 - 12:42

I am sitting on the floor Pinda- you knocked me right off-
;)Pia