Something Special-Dedicated to Beeme,Jupiter,3leaf and Sarah W.

Beeme, just sixteen years old and you define talent.
Draw pictures in my mind with your complex words.
To me your words draw more than Jim Balent.
Fresh words, fresh work, fresh like green salad.
War, peace and stuggle.
Work like that make high ambitions, real and valid.
Quietly the arms of a creation reaches.
That one line had me covered in ovation leeches.
Like a million popes and only you give the speeches.
You truly are the queen of the poet Gods creatures.
Making your way up and gaining the Red circles.
Soon you going to master poetry hurdles.
But f them without you, they're all worthless.
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Moving on to the legendary master known as Jupiter.
The largest poet within the ABC solar system.
If we don't see work about zoo animal dissing.
We know that our beloved writer Jupiter is missing.
He might be strong and almighty on the outside.
But I know he soft in the inside.
I know if he had to choose over me and a hurt bird.
He would take the birds side.
We've had a heck of a writing and critical ride.
Keeping one anothers works fire source alive.
If it wasn't for him those zoo animals,
In screamsavers would have died.
Keep the message high, and express it well.
The story of the great Jupiter.
For my children, it's a story to tell.
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Now time for the man 3leaf,my man Chris.
Started his own raps, in humorous ramblings.
Who would have thought a man could have such humour.
When he dealing with seven siblings.
Don't mean to be bad but i'm going to be honest.
No joke Chris, I'll make you a official ghetto promise.
That I'm going watch your back and protect you from the Bird.
Your rhymes becoming better than mine,word.
Come to think about it your better than me at rapping.
Now come on dude, that's unessasary and absurd.
Now you're an offical gangster in my book.
I'm going to let you know a little issue I had.
When I heard you was made redundant,I got pretty sad.
But now thinking about it,I'm pretty glad.
Cause I wouldn't of seen your work.
Really and truly I'm really glad.
I bet you a pimp in the hood but a number one dad.
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Sarah Wilson, you just a 100% standing ovation.
Wouldn't be suprised if you brought a cherry tree.
To my freaking cremation.
Because you got so many, you a lyrical sensation.
Cherry stone, my favorite of all your grand design.
Reading that over and over, make Mom sound divine.
Is reading your poem that much really a crime?
Cherry stone, cherry stone, eating those cherries.
Soon we going to run out.
And start giving you Berries.
Sarah a friend on here, a friend in my heart.
A true icon, from a lucky escape.
Right to the prosperous start.
Of many years in the future.
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Comments

pinda | July 16, 2009 - 11:34

These 4 writers are magnificent writers but not only do they have great pieces of writing. They have a way of getting their personality across and I beleive these four are the closer ones to be on this site.
So respect x

Beeme | July 16, 2009 - 11:51

Thanks so much for writing this-and inculding me means alot, you're way too kind. Beeme x

pinda | July 16, 2009 - 13:15

Cool,just thought I would do it.
:)

sarah wilson | July 16, 2009 - 13:37

Oh Pinda! I don't know what to say - except maybe thank you and I'll plant a cherry tree for you in my garden this summer! And that poem about my Mum is very special to me too. We've been through a lot and come through it closer than before. And I too, hope this is merely the start of a long writing friendship. Sarah x

pinda | July 16, 2009 - 16:39

This isn't even the start Sarah many years of enjoyable writing to come.

Beeme | July 16, 2009 - 16:48

Pinda, we all have to write a poem about you now ;)
Beeme
x

pinda | July 16, 2009 - 17:28

Lol no no don't.SShhhhhhh! :)

Jupiter | July 16, 2009 - 20:13

Hey Pin, you sure know how to big someone up mate ;-) lol.
I just wish you hadn't told everyone I weigh 23 stone (320 pounds) lol.

As Beeme has decided this is a bit of a love-in I have repaid the compliment with a little rap ditty just for you called

You could hear a Pin explode!!

Hope you like it. :)

threeleafshamrock | July 16, 2009 - 21:44

Pinda, I don't know what to say. The last person that wrote something about me was wearing a blue suit with silver buttons and had a baton ready to shove up my ass. And he weren't writing nice things either lol.
Of course Jupe is off and written some thing already so we're all gonna have to do something now; mine will be very serious of course ;)
Thanks man, I appreciate your words; I'm blushing here lol and that don't happen to often.
Always wanted to be a gangsta but as for being a rapper; if it wasn't for you I wouldn't even try - not even for fun. And it is all for fun and I ain't neverrr gonna pretend to be no rapper but I'm gonna keep having fun and enjoying it - hope other do too.
Thanks again Pin for the kind words.

Chris ;)

Jupiter | July 16, 2009 - 22:17

Of course Jupe is off and written some thing already so we're all gonna have to do something now

Hey don't blame me mate! ;-) lol
Beeme started it, suggested it and posted first at 18:49. I'm just playing along and posting at 20:03
Where you been? ;-)lol

And how could you read my superb piece without commenting on it ha!ha! - it's the job of an offical gangster and pimp in the hood to support me as a rap brother and not diss me :-) lol

pinda | July 16, 2009 - 22:20

Lol just read it,thanks mate.

pinda | July 16, 2009 - 22:22

Awesome, glad you liked it, this was for those closes to me on this site. You sure it wasn't Blackbird with the baton?

threeleafshamrock | July 16, 2009 - 23:08

Was out all day; had to bring the kids to see Harry Potter. Just stuck up something for the Pin man; check it out Rapper King. ;)